This is just to say
Trip Start
Jan 30, 2007
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Trip End
Dec 31, 2011

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William Carlos Williams died more than 40 years ago, but the poet, novelist and doctor left one enduring work: an apology poem.
And as many writing students know, his false apology poem has inspired the format for many modern day poems, like this.
Got to http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/williams/1047 for his original.
This is mine, which I should have left on the Free Food box at a traveller's accommodation in Queenstown.
This is just to say
that i have taken the jar
of Marmite that was left
in the Free Food box
which I am sure you other
visitors to New Zealand
were so intent on trying
It's red, yellow and black labelling
was so appealing
and i needed some of the
velvetysavory paste
to protect me from sandflies
and anchor my stay in this
magnificient place
And as many writing students know, his false apology poem has inspired the format for many modern day poems, like this.
Got to http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/williams/1047 for his original.
This is mine, which I should have left on the Free Food box at a traveller's accommodation in Queenstown.
This is just to say
that i have taken the jar
of Marmite that was left
in the Free Food box
which I am sure you other
visitors to New Zealand
were so intent on trying
It's red, yellow and black labelling
was so appealing
and i needed some of the
velvetysavory paste
to protect me from sandflies
and anchor my stay in this
magnificient place

